I looked at the white caps and even though they were on the development’s small retention pond, they reminded me of a bigger body of water the day after the hurricane. I was twelve and the night before our metal garbage cans had blown down the street. The rain blew sideways, but my father had run out to retrieve them and my mother had told him to just let them go. The next morning I’d never seen the bay so miraculously bright but also dangerous and I imagined how my small boat and I would have fared on that water.
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Reminded me of Hurricane Harvey. Good one, Barbara
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Thank you, John 🙂
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Love this. Reminds me of standing on the bank of Lake Erie after a wind storm. The waves were lively enough to put me in mind of the ocean.
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Yes, I can see that! I wish I had a picture to show how it looked, but I still remember it well. Thanks for reading, Chatter Master 🙂
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Beautiful and evocative writing, Barbara – you capture so much through the smaller incidents of life and immediately place the reader in the narrator’s heart and head!
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Oh, thank you, Annika!
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Nicely described with a reflective ending
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Thank you, Derrick!
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Lovely, Barbara, it brought to mind my reading of The Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemmingway.
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Oh thank you, Robbie. That’s a nice thing to say. 🙂 Thank you, too, for reading.
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